It was a hot sunny day when I heard about EWD and of course with reluctant feeling. I was absolutely sure with my feeling because I had two initiations already and unfortunately I must have another initiation, yes that was right, EWD!
The first thing came up through my mind was that EWD was boring. I asked why must I have two initiations, no, three! I did not like be wrapped on something like this but I was there, in the hall with feeling very tired. I was not a type of person who likes new circumstance. Honestly I preferred to be alone in my own world. There, in pre-EWD time I joined half-hearted and had no interest.
September 7th…
I woke up at 6.00 a.m. and had prepared myself to fight for two more days at Wonogondang. We were going to go there by trucks which were ready. After arriving in Wonogondang we needed to build our tent. Then after building the tent, we have several games until twilight came. When the sun was gone and the appearance of dark came up, we were going to have ‘jurit malam’. It was a cold night with the biting wind blew through my chest and I hated to be there. The ‘Jurit malam’ went on and it was tiring me a lot but yeah at least my heart was beating because of some scary stories –I loved it-.
I had spent around 2 days with one night staying there and all that I could say, it was nice, quite interesting but just not quite right for me. If I had a change to repeat it, I would say no, big no.
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hmm. . .I think "we needed to built our tent." should be "we needed to build our tent."
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hehehehew, , ,nice posting^^
Hi, Yoshi..
nice to see you anymore in your blog..
I'm risma, your teacher of past narrative
Talking about EWD,..?
Well, I had bad impression to about it when I had to attend this initiation.
It was very worse to be remember..
Why..? Because the truck with I rode with my friends was stroke for four times..
Moreover, the daily menu which was offered along EWD was egg ( I really hate egg).
The place also did not comfort because it was moor place (gersang) so it was very hot there..
That made me very bored, no spirit, and other bad feelings.
we have several games until twilight came.
Okay, lets move on your writing
Well, that I like from your writing is you have one full of paragraph to express your feeling before telling your experience. I mean, you gave the reason, so people as readers will attract them to give their opinion first about EWD and move to your story...
But I also noted down here for your grammatical mistake especially for this sentence..." we have several games until twilight came."
I think you should replace "have" into #had#..
Well, I think that's all form me cuz you did not make many mistakes here and good job for you..
Okay, Yoshi, if you still have many questions, just leave that n my blog..
bye..bye..bye.. Yoshi
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